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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon 
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I can still feel your heartbeat against my chest it seemed to be that to you I was always second best I can hear the echo of the painful words you whispered in my ear "I don't feel like this is going anywhere" I couldn't find the strength to beg you to stay okay was the only thing i could manage to say Your silence hurts me more than words could say Tell me where when we went south when where and what day And just how you could have told me that you loved me then act like you meant nothing you had to say your eyes freeze my heart like water on a 30 below winter day my emotions take over me my words just cant flow there's so much left I wish I could say please take away this longing for you just how you took my soul so when your silhouette fades away and all your feelings have gone astray just know that someday you'll wake up feeling just as I am because fate just works that way [This message has been edited by broken627 (12-13-2004 12:04 AM).] |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow I'm suprised no one else has replied to this! I must admit it was alittle cliche BUT none the less, I loved it. You expressed the feelings really well and the depth behind the words, awesome job! AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 I think it deserves some more replies too!  Great write broken! I can relate to this.  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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