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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2004-12-05 10:41 PM

Do you want to go for a walk?
And catch up on old times?

Lets stroll through the white sands and walk through the blowing leaves.

It does not matter where we go, how far we walk, or how long we are gone.

Just as long as we are together,
for a long walk to forever.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-12-05 10:44 PM

I liked this poem alot. Usually I like longer ones, but this one was just the right length. The imagery was excellent! And the feeling I had when I was done reading it was very pleasant.
Great work!
Thanks for sharing.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2004-12-05 10:54 PM

I gotta agree with Stef, this was just right. You have a gift for squeezing huge meaning into tight packages. And yes, it gave me that warm, fuzzy feeling at the end. That whisper of longing from my soul for love like that. Truly great!

-Rich

Winamp Is Playing:
"Here's To The Night"
Eve 6
Horoscopes

"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
~Take Me~ Papa Roach

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

3 posted 2004-12-05 11:59 PM

Short and sweet! loved the imagery. I love how you can sum up something so complicated with metaphores and similies and in so few words! Great Job!

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-06 08:14 PM

I love this! Just wondering if you ever posted this before - it sounds familiar.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2004-12-06 08:47 PM

alli i think you are right lmao it was titled forever... i like this one better anyhow...
laura

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