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Teen Poetry #7

the stars

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2004-12-01 07:04 AM

the stars in the sky
fall when you're not looking
they hold your dreams
and your wishes upon them

you want to believe
but the wishes just fall through
dreams are crushed
eyes fill with tears

i walked the street
and found a star
the wish that had been wished disappeared
and then that star
shed a tear

the dreams you wish on a star
may fall in the street
and disappear so don't cry
when the star sheds a tear
cus maybe your wish never did disappear

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-12-01 10:44 AM

very interesting. i like the concept portrayed here.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2004-12-01 11:25 AM

thank ya

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr
groove on sista!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-12-01 06:37 PM

Beautiful Robin...

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

4 posted 2004-12-02 06:04 PM

O wow, I really liked this! I liked how you worded everything, it made it interesting! good job!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

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