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0 posted 2004-12-01 07:04 AM


the stars in the sky
fall when you're not looking
they hold your dreams
and your wishes upon them


you want to believe
but the wishes just fall through
dreams are crushed
eyes fill with tears


i walked the street
and found a star
the wish that had been wished disappeared
and then that star
shed a tear


the dreams you wish on a star
may fall in the street
and disappear so don't cry
when the star sheds a tear
cus maybe your wish never did disappear

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
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1 posted 2004-12-01 10:44 AM


very interesting. i like the concept portrayed here.
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2 posted 2004-12-01 11:25 AM


thank ya

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
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3 posted 2004-12-01 06:37 PM


Beautiful Robin...

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4 posted 2004-12-02 06:04 PM


O wow, I really liked this! I liked how you worded everything, it made it interesting! good job!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

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