Teen Poetry #7 |
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Lost (reworked a little) |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
Last game of season Talked about for weeks gonna be the best game ever and it’s finally here Under the lights for the first time in history Pre-game practice is great plays all planned out calls made my parents actually manage to show…heh. 'best friend' too she screams to me don’t care...down by ALOT Family stays silent Do they want to be here? Half time and half dead heart pounds tearing open my chest trying with all the might in my bruised and muddy body to come from 30 points behind. We need a miracle Or plays and concentration Second half, only half my second wind only thoughts are on the try line 50 meters away haven’t seen it in 30 minutes getting pounded left and right on the ground each time all rage going to the legs legs that must hit hit as hard as the body will allow not good enough body meets the ground again more furious every time my head smacks the earth knocks every play Scrums killing me mind tells me to quit cant, too pissed to give up Last play…and it’s over the game, the season the only thing I have. lost 39 to 5 like it was our first time on the field shake hands-good game Sure, whatever Tried my hardest, everything I had the stands empty now Parents? They were here? Equipment away for the winter may not see the field in the spring. So parents? not in the stands, not on field, not by gate, all the cars are gone everyone’s gone, standing alone in the dark My mind even left me and the field they left without even a 'good game' the tears pierce my eyes like razors Should have known But they actually came this time. it’s all done, over the game, the season, only thing I have. it’s all done, over, trust, care, love done, gone no more, LOST! |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow lots of emmotion in that one. i loved it. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Jsut like the orginial of this poem, I enjoyed it very much. ![]() ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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