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Teen Poetry #7

so called friend

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2004-11-25 10:26 PM

I want to scream, until I have no voice left
I want to cry, until I have no more tears
I’m trying to be the friend you want to me
But I don’t know how much more I can take
What do you expect from me?
I can’t do it all you know
I have feelings to
There are other people in this world
Everything doesn’t revolve around you
So quite pretending like it does!
I’m sick of this, and I cant take it anymore

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
-Good Charlotte

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-25 11:16 PM

wow, i can really relate! powerful expression, too. keep em short!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-26 10:22 PM

"I’m trying to be the friend you want to me
But I don’t know how much more I can take
What do you expect from me?
I can’t do it all you know
I have feelings too

omg lindsay! I can sooo relate to this poem. amazing!

!!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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