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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-25 12:43 PM

why must all be dreary?
why must all be sad?

to the ones that can,
please hear me.

deep within be glad.

listen to the inner child
that cries

"let's play once more".

dont restrain the happiness
that raps upon the door.

for if you seek
youll surely find

but surely look
and dont be blind

dark days await
the slothful smile

just listen to the inner child

sweet dreams

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-25 01:07 AM

i wanna see more cheerful posts!

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2 posted 2004-11-25 03:14 PM

This is certainly very well written and I enjoyed it very much

Andrew

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3 posted 2004-11-25 08:31 PM

LOL! Was that you just talking to yourself? lol.

Anyways...nice write. Happy Thanksgiving.

~Alli~

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~DreamChild~
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4 posted 2004-11-25 10:57 PM

youre so sweet allison!

you always make me smile,and understand me so well!

[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-26-2004 12:26 AM).]

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