Teen Poetry #7 |
Wind Let Loose From My Fingertips |
young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Wind Let Loose From My Fingertips My eyes are as skies of rain ready to fall, Ready to breath new life into an old earth, Prepared to slow its fall just for observers And those who care over the Northern Lights. Sleek as sharpened bullets with pet names, (Just as ly too) Seeking those forever down and on their way out. How long have I been waiting for first shot of the new war? Eternity becomes relative when living in the past. This cold can't stay longer than a welcome extended, But sure can peek in through the fogged windows. I'll pull the shades and dim the lights Keeping dinner fresh for two. (My beloved lonliness, take a seat.) I've suddenly lots all appetite for love and such painful nonsense... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this is my new favorite of your writings. that last part is just like...amazingly awesome. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
good write alex. been looking for your next post. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you both much. this one flowed well out of my mind...ah the wonders of listening to Pink Floyd... |
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