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Teen Poetry #7

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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-22 10:47 PM

why wont you see
from my point of view?

are you so selfish?

my words just evaporate.

i'm wasting my breath.

i'm wasting my time...
no, i'm not.

i love you.

" Whaddya Think? "

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-22 10:50 PM

have you ever had such a hard time communicating with a loved one, that you become so frustrated, only to breathe deeply, and realize that it doesn't matter because you love them authentically?

i hope this poem expresses that feeling of surrender.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2004-11-24 09:28 PM

i do.

and im sure this other person most likely has the same feelings about you, and wonders why you dont see things THIER way!

hey, surrender man.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-24 10:34 PM

quote:
"have you ever had such a hard time communicating with a loved one, that you become so frustrated, only to breathe deeply, and realize that it doesn't matter because you love them authentically?"

Yes, I have. I liked this poem....nice "surprise" at the end.

Happy Thanksgiving.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-11-25 12:34 PM

youre right eagle, and happy thanksgiving day to you too alli, as well as all else!

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