Teen Poetry #7 |
I Can't Stop It |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
These nights have blurred together, Mixed with these tears I can’t stop. I know I shouldn’t think of this, But my mind always goes back to you. Of what little sleep I get, My dreams are filled, By images of you, But they’re just dreams. For every thought of you, Another tear falls, Because I can’t comfort you, When you need it most. It tore my heart out, To have to walk away, And leave you sitting there, With that scared, lost look…. I want to scream, Until my throat is raw. I want to cry, Until I cry myself asleep. It’s so hard to stay positive, When everything around me, Reminds me of you… And once again - depression surfaces- And the cycle repeats itself. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"It’s so hard to stay positive, When everything around me, Reminds me of you…" Yeah, I know that feeling. It's really hard when everything around you reminds you of the person that hurt you, or depending on the situation, you hurt. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
very good write. packed with such bleeding emotion. i could feel the feelings expressed. truly artistic. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Impressive! I see you are still writing as good as ever... -Titus |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks everyone. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
'Of what little sleep I get, My dreams are filled, By images of you, But they’re just dreams.' all your poems, i find at least something in which i can relate to. this was no exception. amazing job. -kelly remember to breathe after you exhale. |
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