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Teen Poetry #7

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-11-17 01:54 PM

Prepare my  wings,
        for flight.
A ballerina's subtle twirl,
        of bountiful delight.

A refuge of faith,
        forever and for now.
An actress acts with distaste,
        and then takes a bow.

Prepare my  wings,
        for flight.
A poets unhallowed calling,
        a poem gentle in the night.

A refuge of learning,
        for a future of power.
Opportunitie abundant
        a lonely flower.

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-18 02:37 AM

nice rhythm n' flow...
very pleasant.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-18 05:25 PM

It's nice to see you posting alot recently...your poems are amazing!

~Alli~

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2004-11-18 09:26 PM

Well done on this one.
I like your creative style. It's good to read something that isn't a usual jumble of verses put together in typical form.

I like this one. keep it up

"One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley
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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-18 10:08 PM

what ya mean typical form javi? lol anyways this poem was killer keep up the good work.
robin

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