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0 posted 2004-11-16 12:42 PM


my heart pounds whn i see you
my hands start to get sweaty
i'm never nervous
so why am i now?

you next to me
holding me
i feel your warmth and love all around me

your kisses so sweet on my lips
your arms so warm around me
i know you were the right choice

your smile
your eyes
your tender touch
it all captivates me

is this why i am so nervous?
could it be true?
is it love
or is it lust?

we shall soon know

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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1 posted 2004-11-16 05:26 PM


did you write this poem for matt?
hehe... j/k...



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2 posted 2004-11-16 08:13 PM


Love this Robin! I can really relate...nice job!

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3 posted 2004-11-16 08:35 PM


lol no i didn't write it for matt it jsut came out of my head. that's how all my poems come together

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
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