Teen Poetry #7 |
the reflections of fractured smiles which i look right through. |
electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i. we are so wrong. if i counted the ways… well, she wouldn’t understand either. it’s our hearts. they’re not as shallow as everyone thinks. ii. she’s so focused on her eye make up. so focused on her stick on nails. well, only so much glue can make up for her being perfect. i hope she cracks when she least expects it. where’s her free spirited soul? iii. our family can hide the imperfections. but i see more than they expect. iv. the pictures tell everyone who your smile once was. you both were so happy. i believe i’ll be like you someday. v. except i’ll tell the truth. and when someone talks about romance, i’ll say i’m in it till i die. and i’ll smile like i did on the younger days when things were so complicated, you didn’t have to understand. my kids will thank me for not wearing stick on nails. my kids will always forgive their daddy, for not yelling loud enough. vi. my future will be your reflection. except much shiner. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I enjoyed Smile |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
i especially enjoyed the conclusion. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was pretty good. it should be shinier not shiner. just a note. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow! very good in my book. it's going into my library. i loved the flow on this one. thanks for the read. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i love this! great job! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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