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Teen Poetry #7
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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28
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predestined and foreknown
0 posted 2004-11-11 11:39 PM

If you only knew the feelings
i have so deep inside,
such as the sorrow in my heart
should i ever make you cry,

or jouyousness that fills me up
from the bottom to the top,
in the happy times we laugh so much
the whole world 'round us stops,

and overwhelming longing for
the pleasing pulse of passion;
a fire kindled deep within
burning in lustful fashion,

perhaps then you can understand
just how I love you so.
I cherish you with all my heart,
from where my feelings flow.
© Copyright 2004 Derrick Gillum - All Rights Reserved
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-13 12:09 PM

this is a very sweet poem, and you express your feelings well. good job.
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2 posted 2004-11-13 10:58 AM

Love this! It flows perfectly...great write!

~Alli~

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