Teen Poetry #7 |
It Takes Time |
LiL-Jew Junior Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 30 |
It takes time to laugh It takes time to cry It takes time to live To learn to say goodbye. It takes time to love It takes time to hate It takes time to battle To beat your own fate. It takes time to struggle It takes time to forgive It takes time to suffer And then it takes time to recieve. It takes time to live To learn to say goodbye I takes time to struggle To find the reasons why. It takes time to hate To learn how to forgive It takes time to love To learn how to live. I wrote this one after a death of a really good friend. Please tell me what you think. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
The time of everything is what it takes. To make it through the good, the bad, and the ugly. Many sympathies to you and your friend... but as you said it will take time. NJS |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Good work. ~Jess "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice write, it's so true but often it takes so long to realize that it does take time. nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
You amaze me! ~*Everything will be ok in the end, and if it is not ok, then it is not the end.~* |
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