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Teen Poetry #7

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I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

0 posted 2004-11-08 07:53 AM

a little rough but here u go anyway....

Your lips
Your smile
That look
The one
        where
I knew you loved me
The smile
That still gets me
        Everytime
I like your insecurities
I love to reassure you

Because to me you are still perfect
                 In every way
You meant it
Every kiss
    i knew you ment it

I miss your laughter
             that only I knew
but your gone now even though
im still
                   very much
   in love with you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-11-08 09:09 AM

Welcome! Wow, this is so great....as for a title suggestion? Perhaps Still would work well here. Please check your email for a special greeting!

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2004-11-08 09:44 AM

thanks, i know this is my first post but ive actually been with piptalk for about 3 years! just i opened a new account thanks all the same
~Emma~

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2004-11-08 12:07 PM

so heartful.
I can relate.

earthdust
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

4 posted 2004-11-12 12:30 PM

awww... so sweet! i like. i like.

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

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