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pammy
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0 posted 2004-11-07 07:09 PM



Sleepless nights and haunting dreams,
I see your face in front of me.
THoughts of love and true devotion
is that all we'll ever be

Words and actions to decieve my brain,
they are slowly breaking my heart.
My emotions played and energy spent,
A broken love, I fit the part.

It seems like you dont care anymore,
About me or what you have done,
Did you even love me or, did you play me?
Were they right? Should i have run.



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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-13 08:48 PM


nice shortie...

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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2004-11-24 09:35 PM


Should I have run? Or do I now?
Running from the truth , but how?

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3 posted 2004-11-24 10:32 PM


"Did you even love me or, did you play me?
Were they right? Should i have run?"


Awww....sad poem.  Hope you are ok.
Nicely done...
Happy Thanksgiving.

~Alli~


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