Teen Poetry #7 |
Brother |
WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Brother How could you do this? Not once but twice! I'm supposed to look up to you, Can't you see that Doing this twice Has made my mind wonder Whether or not I can respect you For the choices you've made? I would think you learned the first time You were so ashamed, And so were we But everyone new it was a lesson in life You did your duties Only complaining once in a while We all helped out as much as we could, Me not as much, but I tried You changed after it happened Became a new person At the beginning it was someone no one liked Slowly you kept changing, With my mind too. I respected you again, So how could you mess it up? I was proud you were my brother, We got a lot closer, Both of use have grown up. Then you had to ruin it? What were you thinking, Just a little celebration For being clean two years? I guess the lesson wasn't learned And now you're in trouble With the law and everyone here You've made home life miserable again, We can't do anything right And always fight. It's so hard to believe this, I just can't see it. I know you're young, But I'm even younger, And I already know better. In a way I should be happy That you've taught me this lesson, Early in life. I promise, I'll never Drink and drive! Yeah- my older brother (he's 23) just got his second DUI or whatever you call it in 2 years. It just really frustrates me b.c he was doing so well! So this isn't my best write, I just had to get it off my chest! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Noting wrong with having to get that off your chest. Spontaniously written poems driven my emotionally charged thoughts or events are the ones I admire most! To the pen from the soul, stoping nowhere in between! Sorry to hear about your bro. -Rich Winamp is Playing: "Left Out" Shinedown Leave A Whisper is knowing where I've been ~Rich~ |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Yeah, thanks a lot! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Like Rich said, sometimes it's just good to vent and get all your feelings out. It sometimes can feel like a weight being lifted off of you... I'm sorry about your brother too. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
dammit man this touched deep... nuff said. ~Express Yourself~ |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
yah, i think we could all read this one again... very, very good. for big bros everywhere... ~Express Yourself~ |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
always good to get your thoguhts and feelings out in writing. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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