Teen Poetry #7 |
karma ghosts |
smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
a perfect smile the dentist gave you fake blue eyes to match... best clothes money can buy yet you're always watching your back. always laughing telling a joke, pretending everything's cool... but at night when you look in the mirror... your insecurities shine through. you take your life day by day... just praying that you won't be discovered. but the green of jealousy can't be ignored in the eyes of your old lover. someday, somewhere, somehow your karma ghosts will haunt you in your sleep... and then you'll realize that i'm the one you need... i'm the only one who can save you from the pain... justify the wrong you've done and further your selfish gain... but I won't be there. sorry, a lot of posts lately, but it's been a while since i've posted my stuff and i've written a lot...a lot of experiences have happened and this is how i cope. "if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is such a well written poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Yes, writing is a wonderful way of coping with things. Keep writing... Hugs Ethel |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
jealousy.....it...feels......so.....good sometimes... |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
I can feel the emotion, my heart fumes with each line and finds all action. The fake blue eyes and the mirror in the evening, this is beautiful. Even the curtain closes with an ending for this person. They run out of options before they know they don't have any. Excellentay. NJS |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
This was good, I liked it a lot. Thanks for the read. Jen I hate what I've become to esacpe what I was. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I also liked this one, great job |
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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
thanks. |
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