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Teen Poetry #7

A better world

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

0 posted 2004-10-27 04:53 AM

Humiliation beyond the wall,
discrimination through the hall,
takin part of my life,
hurting me deep inside.

race difference is a big deal,
also the culture, religion and the meal,
can have an effect on your personality,
don't take part in the wrong society.

Hate, is what the children call love,
disrespect, is what the children call a good sign,
the world need some help from above,
to rebuild the mortified minds.

We need to respect and accept other races,
culture, religion and other faces,
If we could be more understanding and open-minded,
in this world there would be; pleasure and love lineded.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
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1 posted 2004-10-27 05:05 PM

Yay Fleur! You're posting again!

I love this poem, and I admire you for it. I believe that your words teach such a lesson:

"We need to respect and accept other races,
culture, religion and other faces,
If we could be more understanding and open-minded,
in this world there would be; pleasure and love lineded."

~Alli~

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Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

2 posted 2004-10-29 01:32 PM

Thank you Alli. I appreciate your comment. We need peace in this world.

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