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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
closing my eyes, your voice envelopes me, in the dark. grinning so wide, my face might crack in half. your voice is soft and beautiful, i want to wrap it around me forever, like a cherished baby blanket, i need it to stay warm. when you say my name, weariness fades, i can't help but trust you. "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"your voice is soft and beautiful, i want to wrap it around me forever, like a cherished baby blanket, i need it to stay warm." I loved those lines...and this poem was a great write. I hope to read more of you soon,bergundy.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
yes I know this feeling quite well...I have one of my own who does that to me. This was a lovely piece of poetry and very softly spoken just as the title portrays, it brought me a sense of peacefullness. Well done, beautiful write. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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