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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Love How do you know, When you are in love, Is it perfect, With hearts and doves? Will I ever know, If there name is Susan or Joe, How will I know where to go. Is love just like the movies, Where everyone gets all warm and fuzzy, Or is it like in school, Where bobby is seeing Joann, Mary and Sue. I may not know now, Later I’m sure I will, Have my heart filled, And sometimes turned blue. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
"I may not know now, Later I’m sure I will, Have my heart filled, And sometimes turned blue." So very true. You got it right on the first try. Love lifts you up, and then drops you back down, HARD. It'll all be worth it, though. Great poem, man. -Rich Winamp is Playing: "Turn The Page" Metallica is knowing where I've been ~Rich~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Is love just like the movies, Where everyone gets all warm and fuzzy, Or is it like in school, Where bobby is seeing Joann, Mary and Sue." Like Rich said, your poems are always so true. This is a great poem...I can't wait to read more of you! (also gald to see that your posting again...i probably wasn't here when you used to.)  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
This is really good! I like it tons! Wow, I really dont know what to say. But this is awesome! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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