Gentle Lips (Hope You Like)

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Teen Poetry #7

Gentle Lips (Hope You Like)

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2004-10-25 02:57 PM

Gentle Lips

Your gentle lips,
Make me curl,
When I kiss you,
They take me to another world.

The butterflies that come,
Never go away,
We’ve been together for two years,
I hope they never fade.

Our relationship is strong,
Our friendship is true,
I just wanted you to know,
That everyday I’m loving you.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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1 posted 2004-10-25 05:09 PM

"Our relationship is strong,
Our friendship is true,
I just wanted you to know,
That everyday I’m loving you."

Branden..i just love that part! This poem is so sweet...great job. :-D

~Alli~

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WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2004-10-25 07:09 PM

This is awesome! Though the guy that I loved and I hadn't been together 2 years, this is the way I felt about him.... till I found out he had another gf at home. <~3

Good Job,
Bailey

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and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2004-10-26 03:29 PM

Bro, this was beautiful! I wish I had someone to feel that way about! Great poem man! Know where you're coming from!

-Rich

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