Teen Poetry #7 |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
Can you tell how a person is really like with out looking underneth the light ? take a look at the guy you like tell me what you see tell us what you think of he is he true, is he neat? does he make your heart skip a beat? is he nice, is he cool? does he act like a total fool? does he make you smile, does he cheer you up? can he get rid of all your fears? can the both of you get along? with love by your side can you go wrong ? so com'on what do you think of he? dont be shy, go on tell me before you answer that let me ask you this and dont lie, tell the truth, just try Do you even know this person at all? maybe he's just there to watch you fall... |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Cute poem. ![]() My favorite parts: "is he true, is he neat? does he make your heart skip a beat?" "does he make you smile, does he cheer you up?" Like I said before, a cute poem...good job. ![]() Keep posting redangel! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
"Do you even know this person at all? maybe he's just there to watch you fall..." I loved these lines and can totally relate to this . . . Great write! ![]() * For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." * |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
red, I would answer all of the above and yes and no *smile* we never do know, nice writing |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is what my friends have been saying to me for the last week and a half...... well written and i love your work... keep them ccomin.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
i like this poem. kinda makes you think whether or not the guy's worth your time. good job. Why can't I feel anything from anyone other than you? |
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