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Teen Poetry #7

I feel for you

Baby D
Junior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-10-28 06:37 AM

Love feels so great,
when everything is fine,
Love feels so great,
but eventually overtime,
Love causes heartache,
and love causes pain,
Love makes you feel crazy,
and almost go insane,
You remember how great,
love used to make you feel,
and you wonder why,
it takes so long to heal,
your hearts torn in two,
your always near to crying,
your alive and healthy,
but you feel as though your dying,
Love used to feel so great,but,
Love is something i've grown to hate,
Love is something it's painful yet,it's true,
Love is something i feel for you.

-=Kiff=-
Junior Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 16
North wales UK

1 posted 2003-10-28 08:14 AM

WOW great poem I really felt it, I especially like:

"Love is something it's painful yet, it’s true,
Love is something I feel for you."

It's just so......godamn true

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-10-28 09:39 AM

It's not hard in pain to conjure pain into the description of what Love should have been. That's when you ask yourself... was it Love?? Very strong in emotion and I am fond of the last two lines.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-28 09:54 AM

it all just seems so ironic at times.....

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