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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I heard you screaming... Crying...from the dark... The trees quiver, From that unholy sound... Oh how that sound haunts me... I heard you screaming... Shouting...through the pain... The wind responds, With its own ghostly sound... Oh how that sound haunts me... I heard you screaming... Shrieking...through the tears... Vocal cords torn, From the suffering... Oh how that sound haunts me... "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Yep yep! Looks like my idea helped!  Great work. ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good oonnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeee. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I read this while you were in the process of writing it. Very nice job. I think this one is very good. *I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...* |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i really like it alot. the form of it was very cool, the idea was meh, but as a whole it was great!! now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
This does have a creepy way of being vocal doesn't it?? I find it a very cool idea and I applaud you spine grinder, yet another excellent piece. Creepy trees. NJS |
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