Teen Poetry #7 |
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What Do You Think? |
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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
What Do You Think? (Male) What do you think of me? When I make a move Do you wish to flee? What do you do When I say What I think of you? Do you adore the way I stare at you, Admiring your face? Why do you quickly look away When I look into your eyes? Deep down do you abhor me? Or is it just your love in disguise? (Male) What do you want to see? Me make a like a tree, Not to stay around, but leave? Or do you want me to tarry, Holding you forever, Hoping we'd marry. Do I make you swoon, When I say my love Couldn't be more true? When I say There's nothing we can't do? So what do you think of me? Is it something we have in common? Is it something on which we agree? (Female) I wish I was in love With you for future years. I'm sorry I make you Walk this Trail of Tears. This may sound harsh, But I mean you no harm. I'm not attracted to your looks, Nor to your charm. I hope you can move on. That this darkness in your heart Will turn into dawn. MY heart soars for another. I will hope yours will too. (Male & Female) What do you think? Of this world and of this life? Love is as sharp as a knife, And hard as diamond. It will pierce you to the heart. And leave a wound that will not heal. You cannot avoid it, Sometime you'll feel. It will take you so high, In a world so surreal. And leave your heart dry, And dropped down to the dust. You'll invest all your faith. Just to have one break your trust... © Matthew Peterson 2003 |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I enjoyed this it was very good..hmm Im just thinking about it still maybe ill add to my comments later -ash I wear my crown of thorns |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
this was awsome i reallly enjoyed reading it. the linking of the two and how it cam together. you have a real talent keep tighting [This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (09-26-2003 01:33 PM).] |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
beautiful. good write. |
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