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Peach
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 33

0 posted 2004-09-20 11:22 AM

A cat can die eight deaths
and still get through another
people can have fight
but still love eachother

You can live through a plane crash
and still take the next flight
You can eat enough for two
and still want the chocolate that's in sight

A parent can be near death
and still get up to help their kid
somebody can come in last place
and still be proud of how they did

So why can't we get through
that one bad day we had
maybe it'd be better
and I wouldn't be so sad

I wonder why everything else can be fixed
and be how it's suppose to be
it's because nothing could ever hurt as bad
as when you put an end to you and me

If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything.

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

1 posted 2004-09-21 12:30 PM

that was awesome i totally love it wow

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

2 posted 2004-09-21 12:59 PM

Ahhhhhh, I just simply love this one. You expressed your feelings so well. I love this poem sooooo much. I cant stop reading it. Someone please stop me before I go insaine, I really cant wait until I read more of your poems.

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

3 posted 2004-09-21 01:21 AM

seemed simple the first read, deeper on the second. this it made me start to think about human instinct, human psychology, and basic human emotion. i'm weird, i know.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-09-21 08:14 PM

I can relate to this so well right now it's scary. Great job at expressing yourself. I especially love the end.
Thanks for sharing.

WinterWren-
Counting stars wishing I was ok,
Crashing down was my biggest mistake.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2004-09-21 10:49 PM

thanks for the great read it was awesome!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-09-21 10:59 PM

Megan, I'm just sitting here speechless, and I really don't know what to write.

I really liked this poem, a lot...you did express your feelings wonderfully and I think you did a great job.
I'm saving this in my library, hope you don't mind.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

7 posted 2004-09-22 06:32 PM

Wow . . . This was really good. It's beyond words, it's that good!

* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

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