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Once or Twice
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
Under the writer's nose lay finger's tapping one at a time "What to write" "What to write" "If only to let them think once or twice If only to let them think once over night" Simple confusion for the masses? A possible query over their glasses? "What to say" "What to say" Again he begin to write his riddles and rhymes Again his mission lay clear and his mind began to write Under this writers eyes lay finished work, his prize He read it once, read it twice His mission complete, it made him think twice |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"He read it once, read it twice His mission complete, it made him think twice" Is this your theme poem? lol... Seriously though, I liked this poem and thought that you did a nice job with it.  Keep on posting!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
theme poem...i don't know. i was trying to convey what my name meant. some people that read my stuff say it's confusing or that they have to read it a few times to understand the meaning. hence my screen name. i didn't really even plan for this one to end like it did. it just worked. it got a little predictable, but i can't fit my own style everytime. |
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