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Teen Poetry #7

I've Got You

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

0 posted 2003-10-26 05:33 PM

A concrete jungle
And the broken bones go unforgiven
Buried treasure's
Got you diggin' deep
And I've got you pegged.
A faded memory
Drawn in brail
Carve my bliss
Into your prison walls
Look the other way...
Tit for Tat,
I've got you pegged.

I am not a man because I am of men. I am a man because I am of the Spirit, among men.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-27 12:00 PM

good write. tit for tat?

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

2 posted 2003-10-27 08:23 PM

wow...too good for me to think of anything to say.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

3 posted 2003-10-28 09:51 AM

"A faded memory
Drawn into Brail."

This by itself was great, and poked me right in the face;I understand this concept. I must say the whole piece was good but tit tat?? Nice.

NJS

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

4 posted 2003-10-28 11:34 PM

tit for tat is a subsititute for ****** me once but I got you pegged. I just didn't wanna get in trouble...

Coming of age is a tragedy, this I hold to be self evident.

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