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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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(This is just one of my ventures into sonnets. comments would be appreciated.) Perfectly Imperfect entranced and untalkative sandwiched between boredome and television may be we could go for a walk if you feel like moving from your couched position perfectly imperfect i would have it no other way beautifully imperfect please could you just stay if only for a moment longer flash that smile once more you know, the one that makes me stronger before you sneak past my door beautifully, perfectly imperfect, there is no other way beautifully, perfectly imperfect, please stay this way nice use of muffin |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
wow i like it, it was really good wow Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i don't know why you only got one response. well now, i'm making it two responses  i really loved this. it almost sang to me in a way. truly, truly beautiful. always keep that pen to paper! best wishes-kelly. i could be a accident, but i'm still trying. |
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