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Teen Poetry #7

Tonight

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-09-09 01:19 PM

If I could get another chance,
To start out fresh,
And be with you again,

I would not think twice,

If I could get another chance,
To stop those first tears,
That you cried,

I would give up my fears,

If I could get another chance,
To see those eyes light up,
Yet one more time,

I would pray a thousand times,

If I could get another chance,
To give you the first kiss,
And capture the essence,

I would forever be in debt,

If I could get another chance,
To love you right,
From the first time,

I would rest better tonight…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-09-09 05:21 PM

Aww..this was sooo sweet. I know how it feels. amazing write.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

2 posted 2004-09-09 08:11 PM

i like this a lot it is very touching very good job

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-09-11 08:03 PM

Yea, I agree with Karissa...this poem is so sweet. It is very a very emotional poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep Posting!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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