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akforty7
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since 2004-01-10
Posts 18


0 posted 2004-08-29 07:41 PM


music

I've seen deeper eyes than yours girl,
But none seem to have the fire...
That I've seen and felt in yours girl,
When you touched me with your smile.

It seems I've always known you,
and I think you feel the same.
I loved you in my dreams girl,
even before I knew your name.

This is..a love song..for you.....
Just to let you know the way I feel.
And I hope you feel it too....
Cause this is a love song just for you

Could it be we lived before now?
Could it be exactly the same?
Perhaps our love's eternal...
Or is it only here today?

Well my dark haired girl I love you
In my arms is where you belong.
I hope you know how much I love you,
When you here it in this song.

And...
This is..a love song..for you.....
Just to let you know the way I feel.
And I hope you feel it too....
Cause this is a love song just for you

music



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aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
1 posted 2004-08-30 06:34 AM


this is beautiful..... the emotion you have in this is awe inspireing....
would love to read more of your work
and about the title....
you could call it love song...
coz thats wat it is.....
keep it up
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-12-25 06:29 PM


Great write! Love this!
Merry Christmas!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

kristina
New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3
w. Burlington IA
3 posted 2004-12-26 12:15 PM


Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at wbgirl2002@yahoo.com  you should name this song for you
kristina
New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3
w. Burlington IA
4 posted 2004-12-26 12:15 PM


Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at wbgirl2002@yahoo.com  you should name this song for you
kristina
New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3
w. Burlington IA
5 posted 2004-12-26 12:15 PM


Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at wbgirl2002@yahoo.com  you should name this song for you
tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
6 posted 2004-12-26 02:10 AM


wow the way you put your emotions into words is amazing... and it is very focused i usually do not like longer poems but i enjoyed it thanks
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