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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
music I've seen deeper eyes than yours girl, But none seem to have the fire... That I've seen and felt in yours girl, When you touched me with your smile. It seems I've always known you, and I think you feel the same. I loved you in my dreams girl, even before I knew your name. This is..a love song..for you..... Just to let you know the way I feel. And I hope you feel it too.... Cause this is a love song just for you Could it be we lived before now? Could it be exactly the same? Perhaps our love's eternal... Or is it only here today? Well my dark haired girl I love you In my arms is where you belong. I hope you know how much I love you, When you here it in this song. And... This is..a love song..for you..... Just to let you know the way I feel. And I hope you feel it too.... Cause this is a love song just for you music |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful..... the emotion you have in this is awe inspireing.... would love to read more of your work and about the title.... you could call it love song... coz thats wat it is..... keep it up Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! Love this!  Merry Christmas!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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kristina New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3w. Burlington IA |
Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at [email protected] you should name this song for you |
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kristina New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3w. Burlington IA |
Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at [email protected] you should name this song for you |
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kristina New Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 3w. Burlington IA |
Wow i love your song i would love to hear about ne new work at [email protected] you should name this song for you |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
wow the way you put your emotions into words is amazing... and it is very focused i usually do not like longer poems but i enjoyed it thanks |
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