Too late to stop the tears

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Teen Poetry #7

Too late to stop the tears

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

0 posted 2005-10-14 02:00 AM

It's just too late to stop the tears
They've fallen and they just won't go away
You haven't told me you love me
So why do I feel this way

Why do I waste my nights thinking of you
Why do I dream if they won't come true
Why do I smile when my skies are so blue
Why do I waste my time on you

It's just to late to stop from crying
The pillow under me is wet with my fears
You'll never love me the way I wish you would
and Tonight I'm gonna fall asleep in tears

The baby won't ever know who you are....

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-10-16 12:03 PM

wow you have so much going on if you ever need some one to talk to my aol sn is tearsoflove13762

love the poem
Laura

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-05-14 08:34 PM

I'm going thru the same thing right now. But it's different. Cuz He says he loves me, but i think he's just saying that. I know what he wants,but he's not gonna get it from me. so i hope you get the guy to say he loves you. And if he doesn't well then maybe it was never meant to be. But if he does say he loves you, make sure it's love and not the other thing.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-05-14 09:56 PM

hey i loved this so much... it was so good.. i think it could do without the last line but that would defeat the purpose of the poem in itself.. so good job.. going in my library..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Sweetpali08
Junior Member

since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

4 posted 2006-05-16 02:11 PM

SADDD BUT GOOOD....

kEEEP THEM COMING..

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

5 posted 2006-05-16 06:41 PM

wow this was good keep it up!

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