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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-10-24 10:03 PM

now your mind is going to get me
your arms are holding me tight
there is no escaping that look in your eyes
i fell for..everytime i saw them
how can this be
it wasn't that long ago i met you
i want to feel your hand in mine
like you'll never let go
never leave me sitting in the coldest
darkest nights when the shadows do creep
you'll be there
holding only me

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

[This message has been edited by Riley (10-24-2003 10:03 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-24 11:06 PM

i want to feel your hand in mine
like you'll never let go
never leave me sitting in the coldest
darkest nights when the shadows do creep
you'll be there
holding only me

Riley, I really do like this. It's good to know
that someone will be there and hold on to you.

Hugs

Ethel

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-25 12:55 PM

....good oonnnnnneeeeeeeeee......

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-10-25 09:10 AM

garysgirl- i wrote this while talking to my boyfriend ^_^! i hope he will be there for me in the future like he is now!

dertah- thanks

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2003-10-25 02:37 PM

Although I don't have a boyfriend at this point in time...I think everyone feels this way! You did a great job at expressing that! Great poem! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2003-10-26 01:25 PM

This is really weird cuz I wrote a poem that's similar to this one last night...hmm...anyway, nice write. Thanks for the read.
Jen

"Worry is like a rocking chair--it gives you something to do but
it doesn't get you anywhere." -- Dorothy Galyean

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2003-10-26 02:28 PM

broken dreams- thanks for the reply

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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