fingers spin the words to an early grave

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Teen Poetry #7

fingers spin the words to an early grave

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-08-02 10:27 PM

my phone died tonight while i twirled it's face to vertigo.
The funeral was short and silent.

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

1 posted 2004-08-03 02:49 AM

This was a little confusing, but I think you had good intention, I like the way it was short and how you got your point across. I hope to see more of your writings in the future.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2004-08-03 10:06 AM

hmmm, pondering the interpretation of this one...I like what you do with words

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-08-03 05:05 PM

thanks

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-08-04 11:35 PM

I actually sort of thought this was funny. I dont know if it was intended to be, but
it was...

It made me think, and i love it.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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