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my sweet baby |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
February Je pense que toute le monde pense que c'est stupide... I think that everyone thinks its stupid -my idea, my dream Il dit lui m'aime... He says he loves me Days upon days Dreams and boredom Moving, living with one I say I love and know in my heart I would never marry July I can't handle him anymore He yells, calls me names He didn't even buy me a birthday present but he bought himself something expensive So I left, found someone new to love Went home October Slumped on the side of my friend's bed Disbelief, stupor, fear Tears I'm pregnant im 17 Angry parents, frozen parents meet the daddy I make a decision Life grows within me, and I love the life I bear I'm going to keep my baby November I felt it move for the first time Friends touch you baby, feel me, feel you i love you Il est tres difficile, il dit toujours qu'il m'aime... It is so hard, he always says he loves me... J'espare... I hope Spring Your cry filled my ears Daddy cut your cord You held my finger my sweet baby |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is a very beautiful yet difficult situation. Bringing a baby into this world is the most amazing an experience that could happen to a person. Being a parent is not only the hardest job, but the most important and rewarding one. No matter whether a baby was a "mistake".... a life is never a mistake. Having the baby was the best decision you could have made and Im sure he/she turned out great  great poem, although I have not yet had a baby of my own, I surely hope to someday. I also would like to say that I liked how you took us on a trip through time, and how you brought in the process of your mentalality and the surrounding circumstanes of each month. My question, though, if you dont mind me asking (curiosity kills me sometimes): how's the father? and how's the baby? Thank you for the read. Surely, I hope to read more. -javi- "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
The father and I just celebrated another year of marriage (more than ten) and he has two sisters - Yesterday I was thinking about how I'm so glad I have him. Things could have been really different for me had choices been different as a teen. But I have been so blessed being a part of him growing into a young man. It's been a tough haul to figure out who I am as a person in the midst of trying to be a good mom, but for the record, writing poetry has been a major part of my healing and figuring out who I am, and learning how to love in my actions - even when I'm totally frustrated Thanks for having this space to post - I needed to think about this |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
beautiful.... Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thank you |
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