Your Taste still lingers on my lips.

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Teen Poetry #7

Your Taste still lingers on my lips.

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-07-27 04:08 PM

A day of lawn sports and scaling mountains.
A walk in the woods.
A swift game of cards.
With matters of family and friends at hand.
Your beautiful, still smiling from ear to ear.
I love these moments, shared with you.
In your backseat, listening to sappy old love songs on the radio.
The music fading with every passing tunnel
our fingers danced together
in the darkness of a dimly lit highway road.

I hope your sleeping good at nights....
Knowing I never sleep at all

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2004-07-27 08:51 PM

This seemed very nice. I liked where this was heading, although It did seem like it could have continued on a little bit.
Regardless, i did like this very much.

You should keep posting as well as replying!

looking forward to seeing more of you on the boards

I left my wallet in El Segundo...
And I gotta get it
I got got to get it!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-07-27 10:24 PM

woah...I read your work..but don't always answer in reply. I had to reply. This is by far the best I've read from you.
Its funny how you always use lyrics from songs as your titles...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-07-28 11:02 AM

Yeah... I agree. It could've been longer, but all in all, it was pretty good.
kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

4 posted 2004-08-11 03:25 PM

especially love the end

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

5 posted 2004-08-11 03:51 PM

I liked this very much...so touching and sweet, its almost as if your letting us in on a stolen moment...very well done.
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

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