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matter of mind |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Its only a matter of time, before the matters in my mind, clearly present themselves. I wonder if anything about my bitter yellow facade, tastes sweet anymore? My bones are aging quicker then my skin, its a race for the golden prize of death and contentment. Buckles on my knees grow tighter with each swelling hour. I'm so uninspired by the flouresant, rundown, tearing vinyl, foggy headlight type of life. to be continued... [This message has been edited by Lexy (07-26-2004 12:03 AM).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem was alright. it's very incomplete though- the ending just STOPPED ...like woah- what happened? but it definitely showed to be a great piece in the making..... if you could explain some of your metaphores- id like that too  I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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