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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
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My own world

0 posted 2004-07-19 08:32 PM



Struggling for peace and love,
Struggling for things you can’t buy,
Struggling to find the strength
To make these gently wings fly.

Lost in a world so defined
By status and by name;
Leaving behind the important things,
Only defined by people and fame.

I want to fly so high,
Spread my wings out far;
Let my spirit be free,
Above the hills I would soar.

But my wings were clipped
By the expectations of today,
Leaving me stranded in this world
And unable to get away.

I’ve lost grip on life,
It’s handle I can no longer hold.
I’ve got to give my life to Him
And let His plan for me unfold.

The handle I held onto for so long,
Now broken and in fragments.
It can no longer help me deal
With the sorrows and pains life sent.

It’s remains I will keep
But no longer will I need.
I’ve lost grip, let go;
They’re not a part of me.

I spread my wings out, let them grow,
Flying through the skies.
I am free now because of Him,
I’ve opened up my eyes.

-Erin

This poem was written off of a sudden inspiration, i'm not sure what it was but there's alot of symbolism, not sure if you can tell but yeah, any comments and suggestions would be great!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
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1 posted 2004-07-20 12:43 PM


I really really like this! Its one of my favorites! I dont know why no one has written a reply yet... *Thumbs Up*
Rommance_Touch
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2 posted 2004-07-21 10:59 PM


Really Amazing,,i think the nice poems have less repliers, a slight poems most welcome here
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3 posted 2004-07-25 11:46 PM


hey this is pretty cool

starts out a bit rebellious, kinda reggae style. Roots, rasta...BAM!

ok im getting side tracked. I liked the poem. It was really well done

I left my wallet in El Segundo...
And I gotta get it
I got got to get it!

*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-12-26 11:20 PM


I like this Erin....sorry I missed it when u first posted it!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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