Teen Poetry #7 |
The Handle |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Struggling for peace and love, Struggling for things you can’t buy, Struggling to find the strength To make these gently wings fly. Lost in a world so defined By status and by name; Leaving behind the important things, Only defined by people and fame. I want to fly so high, Spread my wings out far; Let my spirit be free, Above the hills I would soar. But my wings were clipped By the expectations of today, Leaving me stranded in this world And unable to get away. I’ve lost grip on life, It’s handle I can no longer hold. I’ve got to give my life to Him And let His plan for me unfold. The handle I held onto for so long, Now broken and in fragments. It can no longer help me deal With the sorrows and pains life sent. It’s remains I will keep But no longer will I need. I’ve lost grip, let go; They’re not a part of me. I spread my wings out, let them grow, Flying through the skies. I am free now because of Him, I’ve opened up my eyes. -Erin This poem was written off of a sudden inspiration, i'm not sure what it was but there's alot of symbolism, not sure if you can tell but yeah, any comments and suggestions would be great! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I really really like this! Its one of my favorites! I dont know why no one has written a reply yet... *Thumbs Up* |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Really Amazing,,i think the nice poems have less repliers, a slight poems most welcome here |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
hey this is pretty cool starts out a bit rebellious, kinda reggae style. Roots, rasta...BAM! ok im getting side tracked. I liked the poem. It was really well done I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this Erin....sorry I missed it when u first posted it! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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