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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
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Washington, USA

0 posted 2004-07-13 08:55 PM



Tired is how I feel.
Been so busy, I don’t know what’s real.
Had fun last night, I’m still feeling the dream.
Got home so late, I can’t remember our date.
Sounds kind of funny, but also really sad.
You are one of a kind and my friends hate you,
And don’t give a damn. You make me smile,
You make me laugh. To this day I don’t know why we didn’t last.
Our friends interfere and get in the way; I don’t know why they treat us this way.
What did we do to them? I still don’t know.
I thought friends were supposed to support us in our choices,
But it looks like they aren’t really our friends.
If they were they wouldn’t treat us like this,
Constantly putting us down, turning things around.
Making them the victim, but we always suffer the most.
I wish they could see how selfish they are.
And how they make us feel lower than the earth. Saying I can’t love just because I don’t have what they do.
I can’t remember a time when I wanted what they have. I mean come on, who wants nothing?
They are losing me so fast, quickly slipping out of their grasp.
I’m not going to let them bring me down; I’m too strong for that.
I’m so glad I have you; you’ll be my friend till the end.
I know you wouldn’t treat me like they have; you’re such a great guy, I’m so lucky to have.
It’s getting easier for me to be your friend now that time has been able to fly.
Knowing that we both like each other,
But wont go back in time.
Just the way you talked to me last night lets me know you care,
Helping me with my problems and telling me how much you want to be there.
I have loved you for two years, and been broken hearted for eight months.
I can’t get you out of my head, my heart, and my dreams.
You have captured me, and only you can set me free.


This poem goes out to three of my so called friends, and to my ex bf from eight months ago. He is such a blessing in my life I dont know what I would do without his helpful hints. He is truly special! I know this isnt my best, but just wanted to know what you guys think, enjoy. Thanks

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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2004-07-14 01:35 AM


Ah, so many mixed emotions.  It makes like both great, and crazy, at the same time...  I enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to reading more of your work.

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-12-26 11:41 PM


I like this Stephanie...post something soon!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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