You special touch- a poem about my uncles death

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You special touch- a poem about my uncles death

Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

0 posted 2004-07-05 09:57 PM

I wrote this on the 3rd year since my uncle died, its not the greatest but i put alot of my feelings towards the whole thing in it, if you have any suggestions plz tell me.

Your Special Touch
June 14th, 2004

Three years have passed
And we’ve missed you so much
You always had that special touch
A man with love, determination and hope
A shoulder to cry on when you needed it the most
Many tears we’ve cried
And memories we’ve shared
Each time we were wishing
That you were still here
Each of us misses that loving touch
When you held us tightly
And loved us so much
The day you left us
Is a hard thought to bear
How could god choose someone
We valued so much?
A man with such talent, big dreams and love
I guess all the reasons he wanted you above
His precious garden, with room for only the best
No doubt in my mind
How you stood out from the rest
We’re always going to miss you
That’s something we can’t deny
Although we know we’re not alone
It’s hard to accept the fact that you’ve died
We’re wrapped in your love
And we know that it’s true
Look down on us from heaven
Say a prayer or two
Allen Williams we’ll love you forever
And we know you’ll love us too.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-07-06 01:00 AM

wow,,,,this poems is amazing... and im really really sorry about ur uncle's death!!! .speechlesss

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
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2 posted 2004-07-06 07:23 PM

I'm so sorry for your loss, your poem was truely inspirational and amazing.

~Alli~

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

3 posted 2004-07-09 02:30 AM

im sorry 4 yr uncle death, although it was since 3 years....nice one!!!

No more Sadness, the life will keep going and wont stop

Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

4 posted 2004-08-12 09:55 PM

Thanks for the comments!!

~*.:Leah:.*~

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