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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2004-07-02 08:27 PM

When I wake up in the morning
and my hair is all a mess,
you still think I am beautiful.

When I am lazy and tired
and do not wear any make-up,
you still think I am beautiful.

When I am moody or angry
and I see everything as depressing,
you still think I am beautiful.

When I wear your old t-shirt
and a large pair of sweatpants,
you still think I am beautiful.

I could be so perfectly imperfect
and you would still,
in some crazy part of your mind,
think I am beautiful.

That is why I love you.*

*¤§¤*You are born helpless...and you die helpless...*¤§¤*

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-07-02 09:05 PM

Though this one was somewhat predictable, I loved it. That's exactly how I feel about my bf, he tells me all the time how I'm the most beautiful angel to him and you put it perfectly into words. excellent job and welcome back!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-07-03 05:59 PM

Wish I could have thought up a great poem like this! lol!
I really enjoyed reading this...I'm speechless. It was a sweet poem. I usually don't like poems that don't rhyme because they just sound like a ramble, but this poem wasn't like that. It was REALLY good.
I give it a thumbsup!

~Alli~

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

3 posted 2004-07-04 02:51 PM

This Poem is so amazing..it puts love into words.
Great Read
<3
Persephone

Nancy-
You were my little baby girl,
And I shared all your fears,
Such joy to hold you in my arms,
And kiss away your tears,
But now you're gone

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

4 posted 2005-04-02 10:40 PM

hey, nice job, I like it.

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

5 posted 2005-04-02 11:42 PM

I loved the fact that I knew what you were going to say before you said it. And I usually hate that. Your poem is also original, but good. Keep up the good work.

*~A million words wouldnt bring you back I know because I've tried, neither will a million tears I know because I've cried~*

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