Teen Poetry #7 |
Nearly |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
All my five sense, Completely longing for you. Almost to the point Of actual tangibility. I can see your face, Nearly. It’s almost as if It’s etched in my mind, Just so clear. I can feel you, Your shirt and your strong arms, Nearly. Almost as if You were here. I can smell your scent, To me it’s only yours, Nearly. It’s almost as if You had suddenly Drifted near. I can hear your voice, So soft and sweet, Comforting me, Nearly. Almost as if You had sensed My sudden fear. I can almost taste your kiss, Making me melt, Nearly. It’s almost as if You knew how To make my hear sear. All of these, So close and so wanted, Yet So far. -Erin This too is out of my normal writings so let me know what u think! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant say more,, Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is a different type of poem...never hardly see one in this kinda format. But you did a great job, I love the way you were able to describe everything. For example I like these lines: "I can hear your voice, So soft and sweet, Comforting me" Anyway, great job, keep it up!!! ~Alli~ |
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