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Alone(diffrent than one in dark poetry)
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Alone(diffrent than one in dark poetry) |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"Alone" Have you ever been part of the crowd yet felt alone Have you ever fit in yet been alone Had millions of friends yet stood alone When it came down to it you were the one out in the cold alone Doesn't it feel weird being alone yet surrounded by the crowd One of them yet your own...You think their my friends then turn and their gone and your alone Alone in the cold, Should you have known...You'd be alone A smile frozen in place on your face yet crying inside When you realize your alone you feel small and un-important not bold and strong Did you do wrong...Are you alone, do you know Being alone is not fun espically if your alone in the cold ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
Im inlove with it,,,soo amazing soo interssting keep posting please ur poems are soo cute.................. love and respect Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! [This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (06-30-2004 09:37 PM).] |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Wow I have felt that way a time or two. Great Job! Keep it up! |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
I appricate it sweet...I'm not sure cute is the emotion I go for in my poems usally but I'm glad you like it. Some Poems I write are old and some new. Step: I will try, thanks  Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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edwreck02 Junior Member
since 2003-08-08
Posts 24Florida |
wow, I like it alot, never having a specific "crowd" of people, I've felt that way at times, great write kepp it up |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
edwreck02: Thanks for reading my poem. I think at some time or another everyone make have this. Take Care! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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