Is it me or the world's hate??

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Teen Poetry #7

Is it me or the world's hate??

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-06-28 02:14 AM

Is itme or the world?,
Is it me or the world's hate?,

I cant agree with anything or anyone,
I cant agree with anyone because i dont know what i want,

What do i want?,
What do they want?,

WHat does the world expect from me?
I cant be what they want,
I cant be what they want because i dont like what they have for me,

I wish i would be something rather than being a human being,
I wish i would have no heart,So i would'nt feel pain and what people say and think,

Is there any kind of medicine to shut my big mouth ,to shut my ears for me not to listen,

I wish i never knew how to speak ,or love or hate or anything ,for that it would be better,,

People might have respect,
Maybe love,
BUT WHAT ELSE? !!!!!!!!!!!!

IM NOT PERFECT!!!

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2004-06-28 01:18 PM

Me either! I felt the anger, angst, and frustration in your poem, well done!

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2004-06-28 05:08 PM

yeah i've actually noticed your poetry improving a lot, which is cool. it's easy to feel the frustration in this piece. all i can say is give you some random advice that i try to live by...just do what you want that makes you happy, and screw everything else.
keep writing/posting.
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

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