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Strider612
Junior Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 46
Alabama, United States of America

0 posted 2004-06-19 09:54 PM

Like the black around the stars,
So your hair is like the midnight
And in your face I see
Beauty's gentle glowing light.
Your eyes are as the diamond stars
That sparkle silver-white.
You're far beyond compare
Like a goddess of the night.

I can’t believe the sight I see;
It all seems so surreal.
How are you so lovely,
So alike my heart’s ideal?
It seems to me that your whole frame
Shines like a fair star.
I’ve found a goddess of the night
To worship from afar.

I love the way your dark hair flows
Just as a raven’s wing.
That ebon wave surrounds a face
So worthy of a king.
Take your treasures from the sky;
The moon can be your crown.
Make your dress of twilight;
Let the stars adorn your gown.

I love the way you look tonight;
It’s as though you belong.
I love the way your laughter rings
And how you sing your song.
Wonderful you are to me,
You make the air seem bright.
Come with me, fair nightingale,
Goddess of the night.

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-06-20 10:55 AM

o wow, that was so beautiful! I loved the imagery you put into the poem. I loved it! Keep it up.

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2004-06-25 03:49 AM

hey, some parts were kinda corny...but other then that it really was beautiful
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2004-06-25 08:13 PM

This painted a beautiful picture in my mind. THanks for the read.
Jen

Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's not the end.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2004-06-26 07:09 AM

this is really beautiful.......
hope to read more from you soon. keep it up
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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