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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
give me my negativity back i wanna be empty again what the hell is wrong with me? all i can think of is you. i was infamous bergundy... 'the girl who didn't care' now i'm more dramatic and emotional than Oprah which is mildly amusing because i thought you were 'the one' but you had a chance to run and you took it i thought that love meant more but i guess that was stupid i may not be perfect but i'm damn good at being naive so all i have to say is... thanks for those two wasted years that i'll never get back okay meh i am uber tired n whatnot so i'm gonna leave this one. i just wanted my 500th post to be a poem haha, i do like the end though... "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well congrats on the 500th post.... this is a very strong and emotional post....one I am sure many will relate to.  |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
most definatly some strong feelings people can relate to.. i like it "love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die" |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
I don't know why but I REALLY like this . . . Maybe it's b/c I been there before. Anyways, I'm going to add this to my library! * For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." * |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow awesomee,,,,i totally can relate to that alott,,,,keep it up,, love and respect peace Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Great poem. I really love this one alot. Especially the line, "I may not be perfect, but Im damn good at being naive." Again, excellent. Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library. WinterWren- |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey everyone, wow...thanks for replying. it never ceases to amaze me how weird poetry can be. i wrote this one when i was uber tired and i was like 'meh, whatever. i'll post it anyway' and i'm glad i did because it seems like people actually like it lol. thanks for replying again, be happy. -bergundy- "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice. I think you coul dhave worked on this one better, but you being tired is no excuse! lol! just kidding. you should definitely see if there's anything you can do with this poem, cuz it looks like a really great one. Potential is written all over it. keep posting! I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I agree with Dopey...~lol~ Potential is definetly in the air... Congrats on the 500th post...  Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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