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Teen Poetry #7

crushed

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2004-06-23 02:55 AM

fate isn't set in stone,
and even if it was,
stone can be broken,
into tiny jagged pieces,
or crushed into powder.

my feelingsfor you were,
'solid as a rock'.
but baby,
you must of slipped,
and dropped the slab,
because in the end,
we're all just dust.

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-24 02:39 AM

I like this so much! Wow! It really makes me feel good about myself and I dont know why...I just liked the feeling I got when I read it. *Thumbs Up*

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2004-06-24 05:39 AM

this is rad. i like how you showed images in the poem.

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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