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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Torn and confused I'm bent out of shape So this is what it feels like To be completley used Just take it all Take my hope Steal my dreams Murder my ambitions Holding in my tears While you tare me down Holding on to whats left This mess, this disaster This love was a lie His words make me sick I can't erase him out of my memory No matter how hard I try Im stuck with this pain This feeling of what once was I am being hunted, by these feelings I cant let go So what exactly was real Because I cant decide Did he even exist Or was it all a lie Did I mean something to him? Was I just a girl? Obviosuly I was noth So meaningless to the world So I wonder where I had gone wrong What have I done to deserve this You have broken my heart Torn me down and took me apart Im left in these peices With you to blame Once again I get caught in the game |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Oh Man this one really hit home. My boyfriend just broke up with me, and all the reasons he gave me, made me think that I was just a "play thing". I really really like this one cause I can relate to it so well. Awesome write...Keep up the great work!!! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
Amazinbg,,i can reallly relate to that one tooo,,its awesomeeeeeeeeeee keep it upp love and respect peace Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i liked the last line best, i dunno why...it summed up the entire piece nicely. be careful of typos though, keep postin bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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kirmetboy New Member
since 2003-12-17
Posts 3 |
Lisa hey I just wanted to say im sorry for all the trouble and hurt in the past caused by my lies. I am sorry. I hope that life treats you well and want you to be happy. I am glad I got to meet someone as special of person as yourself. ~Ricky~ |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
YOU KNOW SOMETHING??,,,,maybe life does give you a second chance,,,but if i was lisa,,,i would'nt,,,,once a cheater always a cheater,,even though i dont knowu or her,,but i think if u once lie you will always lie and you cant ever change that ,,,welll thats my opinion and im not trying to be rude,,, love and respect |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
I loved it so much... <3 Persephone You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Look at that...the typical game of love...you never know what's going to happen. Listen...if this guy did all these things to you, believe me, he isn't worth worrying about. Also, if you ever need to talk, I'm here: [email protected]  ,~Alli~ |
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