Teen Poetry #7 |
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Solace |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Frozen in time - forever more My heart complete - together Numb to outside feeling - myself All pain diminshed - mended Healed, if you will - by me Cracked and open - vulnerable My soul and love - all for you Scared - on my own. "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really like this alot. The emotion in it just flows out to the reader. Great length too. I especially liked the last 3 lines. Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library. W.W. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I liked the style here, it's something I haven't seen before. The length was good also. Thanks for the read. Jen Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's probably not the end. |
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